a poem of how i feel right now due to Jin and what she's doing to herself.
I lay in bed and long to dream
But thoughts enter my mind
I want to scream and run away
From the pain of the thoughts unkind
The thoughts that I’m [dying]
It throbs inside my heart
As the thoughts get stronger, so does the pain
Now the agony begins to start
I start to cry and call her name
To save me from the burning pain
It started in my heart
And now is burning in my tear-like rain
The pain now controls me
I crawl in torture on the floor
I scream and yet no one comes
The loneliness only adds to the hurt more
I cling to his picture
“Save me lord!” I cried
I only wanted to escape
The pain was spreading so wide
The pain had turned to agony
The agony raged on
Until it became a constant torture
But all that was just a pawn
I cry and cry
I scream and scream
No one hears
And no one sees
My soul and heart
Are being killed
Tortured slowly and painfully
Until I will be filled
Filled with torture and with pain
Filled full with bloody regret
The pain is killing me
I am its prisoner, I am its pet
It hurts me till I cannot scream
Until I cannot move
All I can do is cry and cry
And let out my soul to die
Saturday, January 10, 2009
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You're on!!!
That's horrible, but it was a great poem. YOU CAN'T DIE ON ME!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!! STOP THIS MADNESS, PLEASE!!!!! STOP, JINNYN!!!!! STOP!!!!!
GAH! what's with the capitals!?
I like to use capitals when I'm feeling extreme emotion or I'm trying to get a point across.
oh. i get it. did u check out the song on dissapearing?
i'm listening to it right now:
http://www.imeem.com/rhojmusic/playlist/TPO94CCt/fearless_taylor_swift_2008_music_playlist/
the one titled: white horse
Kay. Thank you.
thank you for what?
For that web address.
why does it say [dying] in the little brackets?
I was wondering that, too. Why?
because when u change a word u put it in []'s. well, i wrote this at 9 years old and my original word was alone, so i changed it to dying
okay.
Great Poem! I really like it.
YAY! EMMA & EVERYONE LIKED MY POEM! =]
Of course we did. Your prodigy child.
you are such a hypocrite, ry.
What'd I say? I just called her a prodigy child. That's supposed to be a compliment.
no, that wasn't why. I don't remember why it was, now. crap.
Oh, okay. I thought I said something wrong there for a second.
hahaha! nice. NO! i am not a prodigy child. i just liek to write poetry.
all who think Jin is a prodigy child?
*raises hand*
*raises hand also* I!
*forces ur hands down*
*ties jin up and raises hand again*
(p.s. the ropes were sphinx hair. ha!)
lol!
*sticks out tongue*
meanie!
What can I say? I'm a meaner.
*smiles sweetly and waves*
*smiles and sticks out tongue*
lol
lol
WEEEEE!
we is doing poetry in L.A.
OMG!!! SO are we!
NO WAY!
we need a new poem...
ya.
I'm finding some poems off of here for L.A. kay?
Okay. I'm going to make a new record of posts.
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I buried a bird today. It was sad.
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YESH!!!!!
You. Are. A. Moron.
and if you're going to post someone's name, post your own.
lol. did u guys have finals yet?
finals?
no, i haven't. not yet. hey, emma! are you going to that new law charter school? i heard that you wanted to study law from my mummy.
mummy-they way isaac says mommy. isaac is a cute 6 year old british boy. HE'S SO ADORABLE!
Did anyone notice the P amongst the d's.
*raises hand frantically* I DID MUMMY! I DID!
I'm so glad I have such an observant child.
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