Petaled roses
Blooming flowers
Winding breeze
Beautiful summer powers
Are gone when the cold winter comes
Turning light to dark
Freezing over warmth
Trees loosing their bark
Yet summer never did come back
Neither did fall nor spring
Only winter scorches on
Our birds can no longer sing
Our hopes are fallen with the flowers
Their petals and our dreams begin to die
Despair flowing on forever
No one stopping to wonder why
All we know is the time is near
The end that winter brings
We all can hear the deafening sound
The no longer beautiful howl the wind sings
Winter brings snow and death
Both wondrous and terrifying things
This the curse we brought upon us all
The curse the forever winter brings
We all refused to live happy
We all had chosen saddening lives
So to punish us for doing this
Winter stayed with its colder knives
We brought this killing winter here
So please don’t forget
I died with frozen tears,
Streaming down my face in cold regret
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that was good. and i mean like really really good. W-O-W.
winter is killing and its so annoying i go to school in the dark and come home in the dark, i hate it! but i love the cosy-ness of being inside and the crisp feel of it.
wow.
what's this about?
That was beautiful, Jinnyn. You're such an artist. What does it mean to you?
i totally agree.
Hi, again!
hey ry, hey star, hey jin (Who is, for some reason, trying to insist she's a vamp called bloody kiss). *smiles and waves*
i agree i have my suspicions and i swear on anything that Kayj is real i did not make her up
and if bloody kiss came, then where did jin go? and why did all of her posts turn from 'by jin' to 'by bloody kiss'? and don't even do what you did with snow, about us falsly accusing you. that girl you said looked like her and was moving down from alaska? she never showed up. and i never heard about her coming, either. so what is true with you? how can i beleive anything now, and how can you expect me to? i still love you but my trust is varying.
and why does jin's name link lead to bloody kiss's profile? explain THAT, guys.
and i'm pretty sure bloody kiss can't post on this blog. so why is jin's poem posted by bloody kiss? how about you all explain that! and don't even guilt us all into fooling ourselves into beleiveing someone changed it again, because you MADE this blog, and i don't know what to beleive anymore. explain me that, jin/bloody kiss
ya, i know jin. i follow this blog. no i did not post that, jin did. so? I don't care if you accuse me of being Jin, but i know i'm not. It really has nothing to do with me. Talk to jin.
this is hot, love the poetry, you the second poet i've found today nice blog by the way
thanks, Notion. Bloody Kiss, Jin can't post on here, and it was posted by Jin, those two poems were. I don't know who you are or where you come from or what you are, but I know that I sent a note to Jin and hopefully she will tell me the truth.
and i will. a note? from my brother or e-mail note? cuz i never got a note from my bro. well, not yet. plus once again, I'M RIGHT HERE! gosh dang it!
just cuz i leave, some new girl i know shows up and weird unexplainable things start happened i'm atumatically at fault!
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Okay, actually i can see that. i'd suspect whoever left too. no. i dunno how it happened. no, i am not her. sheesh. i am ME. (why is it me being suspected for all the people? well...not always me.)
Last thing, it's for ade:
Yes, yes she IS here. man, no body listens to me! SHE MOVED HERE FRIGGIN' LAST WEEK! she's in St. George! want proof? her name is April (not kimberly, we got it wrong, heh heh, our bad). anyway, i'm gonna go visit her sometime, anyone want proof, i'm inviting you to come with me.
remember ade? i've told you about april. a while ago. remember? it was on the phone with Okami, i told you her real name was april, that she was moving to St. Geaorge, that she's snow, that she knew C.J. when they were little before i was born. is it coming back?
jin, you might have fixed it, but I clicked on jin and bloody kiss's profile showed up.
it's not that you left, it's that all the posts you did still say 'posted by bloody kiss'
also, if you're trying to pass the new profile off as the old one, change the old one. the profile labeled 'jin' says you've been posting since this month, while bloody kiss has been posting since dec 2007, which is when we started the dreamer blog.
i really like this poem. good job. very descriptive.
i am very confused with all of this. bloody kiss is jin? jin is bloody kiss? huh? and who on earth is april?
No, Griffin Rider. Jin is not me. But they think she is. They also think I am her.
But like I've already said, it's a dispute between them and Jin so I'm staying out of it.
*sigh* check jin's profile, where it says 'on blogger since' and it says january 2009. you know as well as i do it's been longer than a month. and if you click on jin's profile from awhile back, bloody kiss's profile shows up.
and april is apparently the physical (human) form of someone who was trying to kill us awhile ago. we have the strangest friends.
Don't we? I met her the other day and I said in these almost exact words, "Hi, I'm (my name here), my blogger name is Nira. I'm their Guardian," I looked over at Jin, "And you tried to kill them. But I won't give you too much of a hard time about it since you switched sides." Then I smiled and left because I had to. It was fun.
By the way, Jin is not BloodyKiss. I am the proof of this. I think the website must have glitched because when Jin removed herself, she invited BloodyKiss, and the website might have goofed.
hehehe. dork.
An inferrior poem compared to mine. Invite me at once and I will show you all what real poetry is!
stop friggin lying to us gosh dang it! and thanks for calling me a hoebag, jerk. NOW STOP EFFING LYRING AND FESS UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do I want to know what that was about ade?
charm is hilarious! "Invite me at once and I will show you what real poetry is." lol!
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